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Original:
To me, making friends is very easy. I can make friends everywhere but should be careful with some curious people. As a student, I usually make friends in the society and class because that is the easiet way, they are the people who spent a lot of time with us besides of family. Therefore, try harder with classmates. However, making friends is not only inside the school but the whole world. Making friends when eating lunch, waiting for bus, buying things, or even having haircuts are very common ways too. Choose to know foreign friends through the internet is also quite exiting. Moreover, having some skills and techniques making friends is the most important. First, try to make some topics with them but remembered different people suits different topics, do not simply talk. Then, talk about some hottest news and makes some jobs despite of lame jokes. After that, it will be having lots and lots of things to chat. In my opinion, Friends do not have to agree anything but have to respect each others. Paying attention when friends are sharing experiences and keep secrets quietly, always caring them, and help them when they need us. That's all. Friendship today is rare.Therefore, appreciate your friends.
Corrected:
To me, making friends is relatively easy. I can make friends everywhere but should be careful with some suspicious people. As a student, I usually make friends in the social circles and class because that is the easiest way, they are the people who spend a lot of time with us besides family. Therefore, it’s important to make an effort with classmates. However, making friends is not only inside the school but also in the whole world. Makingg friends when eating lunch, waiting for bus, buying things, or even having haircuts is very common way. Choosing to connect friends from other countries through the internet is also quite exciting. Moreover, having some skills and techniques for making friends is the most important. First, try to make some topics with them but remember that different people suit different topics, do not simply talk about anything. Then, talk about some hot news and make jokes despite lame jokes. After that, you will have plenty of things to chat about. In my opinion, friends do not have to agree on everything but have to respect each other. Pay attention when friends are sharing experiences and keep their secrets, always care for them, and help them when they need you. That’s all there is to it. Friendship today is rare; therefore, appreciating your friends.
Original:
To me, making friends is very easy.
Corrected:
To me, making friends is relatively easy.
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very easy relatively easyChanged to use more precise language.
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I can make friends everywhere but should be careful with some curious people.
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I can make friends everywhere but should be careful with some suspicious people.
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curious suspiciousChanged to better fit the context of caution.
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As a student, I usually make friends in the society and class because that is the easiet way, they are the people who spent a lot of time with us besides of family.
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As a student, I usually make friends in the social circles and class because that is the easiest way, they are the people who spend a lot of time with us besides family.
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easiet easiestCorrected spelling error.
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spent spendCorrected verb tense for general statement.
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besides of family besides familyRemoved unnecessary preposition.
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society social circlesImproved clarity.
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Therefore, try harder with classmates.
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Therefore, it’s important to make an effort with classmates.
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try harder it’s important to make an effortImproved sentence structure for clarity.
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However, making friends is not only inside the school but the whole world.
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However, making friends is not only inside the school but also in the whole world.
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inside the school but the whole world inside the school but also in the whole worldAdjusted for parallel structure.
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Making friends when eating lunch, waiting for bus, buying things, or even having haircuts are very common ways too.
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Makingg friends when eating lunch, waiting for bus, buying things, or even having haircuts is very common way.
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Makin MakingCorrected spelling error.
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are isCorrected subject-verb agreement.
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ways too wayAdjusted for subject agreement.
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Choose to know foreign friends through the internet is also quite exiting.
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Choosing to connect friends from other countries through the internet is also quite exciting.
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foreign friends friends from other countriesImproved clarity.
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is also quite exiting is also quite excitingCorrected spelling error.
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Choose to know Choosing to connectImproved sentence structure.
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Moreover, having some skills and techniques making friends is the most important.
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Moreover, having some skills and techniques for making friends is the most important.
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making friends for making friendsImproved preposition usage.
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First, try to make some topics with them but remembered different people suits different topics, do not simply talk.
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First, try to make some topics with them but remember that different people suit different topics, do not simply talk about anything.
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remembered rememberCorrected verb tense.
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suits suitCorrected subject-verb agreement.
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but remembered but remember thatImproved sentence structure.
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do not simply talk do not simply talk about anythingClarified sentence meaning.
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Then, talk about some hottest news and makes some jobs despite of lame jokes.
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Then, talk about some hot news and make jokes despite lame jokes.
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hottest hotCorrected adjective form.
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makes makeCorrected subject-verb agreement.
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despite of despiteCorrected preposition usage.
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some jobs jokesImproved clarity.
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After that, it will be having lots and lots of things to chat.
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After that, you will have plenty of things to chat about.
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it will be having you will haveImproved sentence structure.
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lots and lots of things to chat plenty of things to chat aboutImproved clarity.
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In my opinion, Friends do not have to agree anything but have to respect each others.
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In my opinion, friends do not have to agree on everything but have to respect each other.
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Friends friendsCorrected capitalization.
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agree anything agree on everythingImproved phrasing.
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each others each otherCorrected possessive form.
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Paying attention when friends are sharing experiences and keep secrets quietly, always caring them, and help them when they need us.
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Pay attention when friends are sharing experiences and keep their secrets, always care for them, and help them when they need you.
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Paying attention Pay attentionImproved sentence structure.
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keep secrets quietly keep their secretsImproved clarity.
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caring them care for themImproved phrasing.
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help them when they need us help them when they need youImproved pronoun usage.
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That's all.
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That’s all there is to it.
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That's all That’s all there is to itImproved sentence structure.
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Friendship today is rare.Therefore, appreciate your friends.
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Friendship today is rare; therefore, appreciating your friends.
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is rare.Therefore is rare; thereforeAdded semicolon for proper punctuation.
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appreciate appreciatingImproved gerund usage.